my two bits
Just to repeat the other reviewers, the tones could be more emphatic and there's a very-very slight problem with symmetry.
Other than that, I would add some background, a few lines and shades behind + a drop-shadow to make it more like 3D. :)
ehh i like the un-symmetrical quality of it - it gives the art that hand-drawn feeling that I feel is missing from modern art. hmm... a shadow is an interesting idea, will consider~~
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